The plan here is to handle the small stuff first before laying out the bigger issues. I will need notes for each smaller item, however.
Rainshade's description when it's out in the distance should be consistent -- arches and spires aren't mentioned again for example. Also I'm guessing the twin ash trees would be a big part of the skyline (and is plot relevant, and super cool from a thematic perspective)
Description reminders -- another big problem.
Descriptions, particularly the outside of Faeheim. Big problem here.
moss fields in Rainshade break falls (leshers, jousters), so make sure that's clear in its descriptions.
There should be description of a leshian somewhere -- I do like the intentional vagueness but there needs to be *something* there.
The Ashgrove should still provide some illumination during the patches of dark -- it's great foreshadowing too.
Something early on should mention the twin (cut) ash trees and the glowing blossoms coming out of one of them. Maybe Jadzia's first vignette with Rainshade.
