Madeline/Asani needs yet another name change so she's connected to Druidia. Perhaps Bodhmall after more research.
Then I need to figure out wtf Faeins are doing in Druidia -- might contradict both R and O's sections otherwise.
Control the distance to Druidia more closely. Ryden mentions it without the name in 10-R. Also change one of the references to fifty-two -- that's another key number.
I should imply somewhere in the Ferritinium section that there are similar mines for silicon for glass. Keep it subtle, though -- I feel like it'll be a plot point in book #2. Or maybe sand shipments from Druidia. The segment when T talks to W is perfect for this here. Especially since it's close to the first mentions of glass. Also the leshian Grove uses mirrors.