Other Projects

* More of a sense of friendship between Ryden and Qadira -- makes sense because of Thelma and their close proximity in the sentry tower. This makes chapter 16's central theme just about perfect. Look into the thelma trying to get close to the Orlovs thing too -- can potentially pair these. It's a looser friendship from Ryden's POV though -- his friendship is stronger with Thelma. * Look at all references Qadira makes to Ryden, and vice-versa to strengthen their friendship. Also "Second Eye" and "First Eye" -- they shouldn't be using titles with each other. * Both Q and T were captured and there should really be something that explores this commonality. Obviously this AND merging into a shared tree isn't enough to combine them, but still. * I'm thinking Thelma being friends with Ryden (and having no other friends) was a power play. Getting close to the Orlovs. Might want to mention that somewhere in the later segments of Thelma. And then maybe the fact that she feels R is closer with her daughter (even though that isn't remotely true). * Thelma's last line of her message needs to fit in better with when they join.