Nice, finally got a decent role this time. ^_^ Imma' go investigate Hindenburg.

Just missed the "no actions" thingy. My bad ^^;

Still want to check out Hindenburg

So in my story, do I HAVE to say there are guilty in some way shape or form?

If I dont have to make the the person I write about look guilty or not, go ahead and print this story:

_ Chapter 1: The Conducted

"As the train hurried along the tracks towards its final destination, the passengers aboard the train had been hit with a feeling of panic and fear. They had recently just recently been told that their conductor has been found dead. What was even more frightening is they don't know who is driving the train. With disbelief setting in, the passengers already have begun pointing fingers at each other. What these passengers also didn't know is that there was a world renowned detective aboard their train who was already doing some detective work.

His first suspect, Hindenburg. Being one more the more silent people on the train so far, he seemed like a likely suspect. However as night turned into day and another passenger has gone missing, Hindenburg seems to have never left his room...."

OK post this instead:


Chapter 1: The Conducted

"As the train hurried along the tracks towards its final destination, the passengers aboard the train had been hit with a feeling of panic and fear. They had recently just been told that their conductor has been found dead. What was even more frightening is they don't know who is driving the train. With disbelief setting in, the passengers already have begun pointing fingers at each other. What these passengers also didn't know is that there was a world renowned detective aboard their train who was already doing some detective work.

His first suspect, Hindenburg. Being one more the more silent people on the train so far, he seemed like a likely suspect. But, as night turned into day and another passenger has gone missing, the detective, who had fallen asleep hiding under the bed, is woken up by the sound of him reentering his room way early in the morning hours. Could this have been a causal bathroom break, or was something else the reason for his movement?"

Check out Xhin I guess

Chapter 2: Silence of the lamb

The next suspect on the list; Xhin, after all he was the owner of the train, why has he not been able to do anything about this robbery? How does the owner of this train not have the keys to access the engine room? Further investigation shows that Xhin was in massive debt . The train was also carrying valuable cargo in one of the compartments. Was he in on it?

PN, the passenger that had the crap scared out of him the day before, was found dead. Poor guy didn't even have a chance. Did he somehow find out that someone, maybe Xhin was part of this robbery? The detective only knew one thing for sure, Hinenburg sure has a bladder problem, he goes to the bathroom more than a fat person visits the all-you-can-eat bar.

I need to find someone tonight before my what ever is left of my cred goes down the drain.

Check out Evilguy. Hope he has something to hide.