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Queens Revolt Project

Posted September 2, 2026 by Xhin

Again, a small one. Needs work to figure out wtf I'm actually doing though.

  • If Fidela had chiefed both the Spriggan Ash and Fae Ash, she must've been intimately connected to Bodhmall and the queens' revolt. I know Philipp was too. Fifi does need more work.

  • De-emphasize the need for violence in Francis's last vignette, and since Bodhmall committed it, lean *more* in that direction with the last Yusrah before F dies. Obviously I don't want her to be *too* close to it, but be more permissable.

  • Possible discrepancies with Yusrah/Fidela's ages. Yes, all ages are ambiguous by design but if they served under bodhmall they'd probably need very long lifespans -- this works for Philipp and Fidela but not so much for Yusrah, who doesn't have Fae blood. Furthermore, Francis has the same problem potentially -- I know he's younger than Yusrah but I don't know by how much.

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  • While I'm on the subject, Yusrah's last POV is incredibly awkward, and does "as a girl" make sense if she was part of the queens revolt? Also make sure Francis's big vignette is consistent with Yusrah's backstory too. Possibly a draft 3 thing.

  • Make sure the timeline of the Brewer's Revolt lines up with all of the vague mentions towards it.

  • Same deal with the queens' revolt. Search for Bodhmall too.

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